all your comments and constructive critiques are welcome and encouraged
have fun deviantarters and good luck with all of your creative passions!


i'll fly to you anticipating at the door, shuffling toes then cross the floor, matching numbers to their place, filling up one's strangling space, this is what i have to do all slump like potatoes in a sack, we're here now- there's no going back,i'll fly to you


weetabix every morning quaking frozen limbs, and you begin to wake up.weetabix every morning
this is something youre able to do, able to wake up, just.
i bet its hard to leave, those seamless sportscar-sexy dreams,


Picnic in the Early Hoursorange peel pieces of the past fling themselves at mePicnic in the Early Hours
making my hands soapy so your trust slips right through my fingers i've got it it slips caught it it slips good save and it slips juggling jealous fluffy trails and dreamy duvet days
i never was good at juggling (didn't have the patience)
but beer flows from the tap until we trip and still we trip over the tips of our toes alone...together now in the colden bitter house
sandwich meat matters of the mind &nbs
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The earth
will see
our eyes
go blank, tonight.
--
The earth
will see
our eyes
go blank, tonight.
i figured out who you are!
as in, who your poetry resonates of!
JAMES MERCER!
am i right am i right?
yeahhhhh!!
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after only reading the first two sentences you wrote and nothing else i was really spooked lol.
...i could probably go check up the top, actually, but...
shhh
i shall go check stuff out now!
yeah you probably checked that but anyway.
i worked out how to reply to these little comments. coolll.
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